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ICHABOD: OF GODS, WANNABES AND THE EVANESCENT GLORY OF NIGERIAN POETRY by Soonest Nathaniel Scholes

<body><div class&equals;"booster-block booster-read-block">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"twp-read-time">&NewLine; &Tab;<i class&equals;"booster-icon twp-clock"><&sol;i> <span>Read Time&colon;<&sol;span>5 Minute&comma; 21 Second <&sol;div>&NewLine;&NewLine; <&sol;div><p><&sol;p>In a passionate bid to promote the seriousness and importance of poetry&comma; Joseph Brodsky in his opening remark as U&period; S&period; Poet Laureate&comma; opined that what distinguishes humans from the rest of the animal kingdom is precisely the gift of speech&period;&NewLine;<p>For Brodsky&comma; &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;poetry is not a form of entertainment and in a certain sense not even a form of art&comma; but it is our anthropological genetic goal&comma; our evolutionary&comma; linguistic beacon&period;”<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Brodsky noted that&colon;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote><p>&OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;In the works of the better poets&comma; you get the sensation that they are not talking to people anymore&comma; or to some seraphical creature&period; What they are doing is simply talking back to the language itself&comma; as beauty&comma; sensuality&comma; wisdom&comma; irony&comma; those aspects of language of which the Poet is a clear mirror&period;”<&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>It is perhaps on these premises that I have argued and stressed that the goal of poetry prizes or literary prizes if you may&comma; must be to call attention to&comma; throw more lights on and put in the spotlight&comma; works that attempt genuinely to enhance language in ways only few minds can conceive&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>THE NLNG DEBATE<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>When Ehi’zogie Iyeomoan took to Facebook to share excerpts of books which made the longlist for the NLNG PRIZE 2017&comma; many had thought these were just the rantings of yet another attention seeker&comma; but a closer look at some of the points raised&comma; showed that this young man knew what exactly he was fighting for&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote><p>The argument was simple&comma; the NLNG prize is highly revered and as such&comma; one expects that the board must continue to strive towards excellence&period;<&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>Due to the great height at which the prize had been placed&comma; Ehi’zogie and a few others were of the opinion that the content of certain books&comma; made the works fall below the standard of that which is befitting for the longlist of such a prestigious prize&period; It was further argued that there are some great collections that should not have been left out&comma; and one wonders what the selection process entails&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p><strong>GARRI FOR BREAKFAST AND THE FAILED ATTEMPT AT CREATING A NEW MODE<&sol;strong><&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>While I disagree with Ehi’zogie on a few points&comma; still I cannot agree less with him when he states emphatically that the book &OpenCurlyQuote;Garri for breakfast’ is not worthy of the NLNG longlist&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Let it be stressed that Ehi might have been careless with words when he used the term &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;beer parlour poetry”&comma; but I tell you&comma; he was correct when he pointed out that Seun Lari-William’s poems needed more work before they could make it to the coveted longlist&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>I must emphasize that the works in Seun’s book&comma; do not enhance language&comma; neither do they succeed in the attempt at a new mode&comma; as the critic Teniola Tonade would have us believe&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>For me&comma; a collection is as strong as its weakest poems&comma; that said&comma; below are excerpts which tell a lot about the book in question&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote><p><strong>THIRTY DAYS HATH SEPTEMBER<&sol;strong><br>&NewLine;&OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;Thirty days hath September&comma;<br>&NewLine;April&comma; June and November… ”<br>&NewLine;I’ve used this rhyme forever<br>&NewLine;Without it&comma; I just can’t remember&period;<br>&NewLine;This rhyme’s also a reminder<br>&NewLine;That our days on earth are numbered&period;<br>&NewLine;” Thirty days hath September”<br>&NewLine;How many have I&quest; I wonder&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p><strong>WINCHES<&sol;strong><br>&NewLine;Witches are ajebutter&comma;<br>&NewLine;Superstars in Harry Potter&period;<br>&NewLine;But winches are gangsters<br>&NewLine;We’re talking Ayamatangaa&excl;<br>&NewLine;Now you see why there’s suffering<br>&NewLine;Despite all our resources<br>&NewLine;We can blame it on Buhari<br>&NewLine;But we all know the source – Winches&period;<&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>A proper review perhaps&comma; will show that neither the poems in English&comma; nor the rhymes in pidgin bear in them the potentials to chart a new course in the genre&comma; at this point I challenge those who sincerely think otherwise to go on and dissect Seun Lari-Williams’ work and feed us the proteins thereof&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p><strong>ICONOGRAPHY – Casualty of oversight<&sol;strong><&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>As regards Peter Akinlabi’s beautiful panegyric&comma; it is only sad that the Poet was denied a place at the top three&comma; solely because his publisher was on the judging panel&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>For those who had read the works in the longlist&comma; one needs no spiritual insight to see that Akinlabi stood a great chance at clinching the prize&period; This then begs the question &OpenCurlyQuote;why seat on the bench when a collection you published is to enter for the prize&quest; Is it not a rule that those affiliated with judges cannot enter for the contest&quest;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Maybe soon enough&comma; we will get answers to these questions&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p> <&sol;p>&NewLine;<p><strong>SHORTLIST FEVER<&sol;strong><&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>For Ehi’zogie&comma; the greatest proof that all his rantings were not mere stunts of a wannabe&comma; is the fact that some of those who he&lpar;Ehi&rpar; said had potentials to clinch the prize&comma; made it to the shortlist&period; The three who have made it thus far&comma; have works that stand above many&comma; and at this stage&comma; we can only say may the best work win&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p><strong>CURTAIN CALL<&sol;strong><&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>It is foolish to believe that those who raised their voices to say a thing or two about the longlist of the Nlng prize&comma; did so only because their gods and mentors did not make the list&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p><img class&equals;"alignleft wp-image-32662 size-full" src&equals;"http&colon;&sol;&sol;wrr&period;ng&sol;wp-content&sol;uploads&sol;2017&sol;09&sol;The-2017-NLNG-Prize-for-Literature-Longlist&period;png" alt&equals;"" width&equals;"517" height&equals;"287" loading&equals;"lazy"><&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>It is okay to say that the social media criticism of the NLNG prize 2017&comma; was somewhat harsh&comma; but it can’t be said that it lacked truth and substance&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>With the way its being talked about&comma; I think the NLNG must understand that it is seen as highly valuable&comma; not just for the money involved&period; Thus&comma; in a critical attempt not to tarnish the reputation of the prize&comma; and the conscious bid to maintain and improve on the standard of literary works in Nigeria&comma; some of us have drunken the Ashes of our fathers and have found voice to speak out vehemently against the irregularities eroding the standards of the NLNG PRIZE&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Just a few days ago&comma; I picked up Esiaba Irobi’s &OpenCurlyQuote;Cemetery Road’&comma; everyone who knew that drama year&comma; would agree that the best work was selected for the prize – a work that raises the bar&comma; one which can stand up to any other work anywhere in the world&semi; these are the works we long to for&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Our nation is already known for mediocrity in different sectors&comma; we them must continue to come up with productive evaluations to aid in the restoration of the evanescent glory of Nigerian Poetry&comma; even as we also seek to return this nation to her rightful position amongst the comity of nations&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Let iron continue to sharpen itself by rubbing its belly on the tongue of the stone&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Like<&sol;p>&NewLine; &NewLine; <div class&equals;"booster-block booster-author-block">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"be-author-details layout-square align-left">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"be-author-wrapper">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"booster-row">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"booster-column booster-column-two booster-column-mobile">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"be-author-image">&NewLine; <img alt&equals;"" 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