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In The Hush Between Lines | a CỌ́N-SCÌÒ review of Folake Adebote’s ‘The Ways We Fought’ by Servio Gbaadmosi

<body><div class&equals;"booster-block booster-read-block">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"twp-read-time">&NewLine; &Tab;<i class&equals;"booster-icon twp-clock"><&sol;i> <span>Read Time&colon;<&sol;span>6 Minute&comma; 30 Second <&sol;div>&NewLine;&NewLine; <&sol;div>&NewLine;<p class&equals;"has-text-align-center">FICTION &vert; SECHAGE &vert; 2024 &vert; 106 PAGES<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<h5 class&equals;"wp-block-heading">Folake Adebote’s <em>The Ways We Fought<&sol;em> is a 106-page novella&comma; divided into seven parts&colon; a prologue&comma; five narrative sections that serve as chapters&comma; and an epilogue&period; Each part is told in the third person from the narrative viewpoint of specific named characters&period; The work is not composed in a straightforward chronological order but stitched together through voices that sometimes crisscross&period; The book’s strength lies in its arrangement of voices&comma; atmospheric quality&comma; and poetic rhythm&period; Overall&comma; the novella may be seen as a canvas of trauma&comma; endurance&comma; and interior resistance&period; It is the kind of book that does not raise its voice&comma; yet lingers long after its final page&period;<&sol;h5>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>Folake Adebote’s <em>The Ways We Fought<&sol;em> is a 106-page novella broken into seven parts&colon; a prologue&comma; five narrative sections that function as chapters of sorts&comma; and an epilogue&period; Each part is told in the third person from the narrative viewpoint of specific named characters&period; The work is not composed in a straightforward chronological order but stitched together through voices that sometimes crisscross&period; The book’s strength lies in its arrangement of voices&comma; atmospheric quality&comma; and poetic rhythm&period; Overall&comma; the novella may be seen as a canvas of trauma&comma; endurance&comma; and interior resistance&period; It is the kind of book that does not raise its voice&comma; yet lingers long after its final page&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>From its opening lines&comma; the novel sets a mood of anticipation&comma; captured in the very first sentence of the prologue&colon; &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;What if babies can hear and understand us from birth&comma; and their silence and soft babbling are a mere façade&quest;” &lpar;1&rpar;&period; Readers shift in their seats and prepare for a treat&period; In the next lines&comma; they are plunged into what will become a major thread in the novel&colon; motherhood&comma; and the pains that accompany it&comma; alongside African femininity&period; We are told&colon; &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;It would mean they listened to the painful groaning of their mothers…” &lpar;1&rpar;&period; The scene features one of the central characters around whom the novel is built&comma; Fayemisi&comma; whose mother is in the process of childbirth&period; She has twins&comma; a boy and a girl&comma; but loses the boy&period; There is a certain nonchalance towards the surviving girl and even a subtle wish that perhaps the boy should have been the one to live&comma; if there had been a choice in the matter&period; This does not escape Fayemisi&comma; who feels bad for her &OpenCurlyQuote;new’ baby sister&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>Even in these early pages&comma; one notices a play with language&comma; things said and unsaid&comma; or poetics of silence that becomes a defining feature of Adebote’s work&period; Pain is evident across many pages and described in full as we encounter the troubles of the women around whom most of the five narrative viewpoints are built&comma; namely&colon; Fayemisi &lpar;5&rpar;&comma; Morounfolu &lpar;45 and 91&rpar;&comma; Salewa &lpar;71&rpar;&comma; and Moyin &lpar;alongside Kayode&rpar; &lpar;97&rpar;&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>In this light&comma; one can say that structurally&comma; the novel moves through three major parts&comma; each named for and narrated by a different girl-woman&colon; Fayemisi&comma; Morounfolu&comma; and Salewa&period; Their stories do not follow one another in a simple chronology but overlap&comma; reflect&comma; and revise&period; Fayemisi’s section&comma; which follows the prologue&comma; is the anchor on which the full narrative is built&period; We are introduced to her in the prologue as a six-year-old who witnesses her own birth and feels sorry for her baby sister&period; By the time we reach her section&comma; she is a woman trying to become a traditional healer&period; Her voice is tentative&comma; clouded with uncertainty and the debris of girlhood disrupted&period; However&comma; she is a determined woman who defies her father and tradition&comma; and soon finds her way&comma; bringing change to the traditional healing industry&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>Fayemisi’s journey from a misunderstood child to a determined apprentice&comma; and finally a beloved midwife&comma; is crafted with meticulous care&period; Adebote does not paint her heroine as a flawless martyr&period; She is stubborn&comma; bold&comma; at times reckless&comma; but always burning with a hunger for knowledge and a desire for more than her world offers&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>The next chapters shift to Fayemisi’s daughter&comma; Morounfolu&comma; around whom two sections of the book are centrally built&period; She is seen first as a quietly observant adolescent&comma; raised by a family that holds only fragments of who she truly is&period; Through her gentle curiosity and growing self-awareness&comma; we see the faint embers of Fayemisi’s spirit — an intuitive mind&comma; a questioning gaze&comma; a yearning for something unspoken&period; Family life soon alters her life’s trajectory and forces her to grow up faster than expected&period; We follow her&comma; or aspects of her&comma; through to the very end of the work&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>Another character&comma; Salewa&comma; adds a further layer with a subtle but meaningful chapter&period; Her story is that of a devoted lover who must stand by her family through many storms&period; She &OpenCurlyQuote;builds’ her husband&comma; but eventually has to contend with society and his family&comma; mainly his mother&comma; when she &lpar;Salewa&rpar; cannot bear sons&period; We then see a touch of &OpenCurlyQuote;woman’s inhumanity to woman’&comma; another subtle theme that Adebote infuses throughout the book&comma; showing that the struggles women face are in many situations&comma; orchestrated by their fellow women&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<div class&equals;"wp-block-image">&NewLine;<figure class&equals;"aligncenter size-full"><img sizes&equals;"&lpar;max-width&colon; 750px&rpar; 100vw&comma; 750px" src&equals;"https&colon;&sol;&sol;www&period;wrr&period;ng&sol;wp-content&sol;uploads&sol;2025&sol;07&sol;Folake-Adebotes-The-Ways-We-Fought&period;webp" alt&equals;"" class&equals;"wp-image-42503" loading&equals;"lazy"><&sol;figure>&NewLine;<&sol;div>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>Her story flows into that of her daughter&comma; Moyin&comma; who&comma; alongside Kayode &lpar;the only male character the novel views favourably&rpar;&comma; shares a chapter that is mostly a romantic telling&period; This dual-faced chapter brings a touch of modernity and is somewhat different from the other parts of the novel&comma; which are more deeply traditional&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>The novel is neatly tied together in an epilogue where readers will heave a sigh and find some relief after the beautiful weight they have borne by witnessing the struggles of the female leads the story projects&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>One of the quiet triumphs of <em>The Ways We Fought<&sol;em> is its sense of Africanity that does not require assertion&period; It lives in the rhythm of speech&comma; the weight of names&comma; the presence of community that is&comma; at once&comma; protective in some ways&comma; destructive in more&comma; and always complicit&period; The unspoken codes of respectability&comma; shame&comma; and endurance are rendered with subtle precision&period; Adebote does not explain these cultural dynamics for an external gaze but mostly trusts the reader to understand&comma; or to listen closely enough to learn&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>Stylistically&comma; the book’s refusal to resolve its characters’ traumas into neat arcs is a quiet subversion&period; This is not necessarily a story about victory&comma; healing&comma; or justice per se&period; At least not in their conventional forms&period; The work is more about voicing and recording&comma; about speaking&comma; and the cost of doing so&period; In this way&comma; Adebote’s work recalls Warsan Shire’s poetry and Tsitsi Dangarembga’s daring prose&comma; which project women who understand that pain&comma; when spoken honestly&comma; does not need to be heroic to be valid&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>Some readers may find the pacing slow&comma; the plot diffuse&period; But to approach <em>The Ways We Fought<&sol;em> expecting the machinery of a conventional novel is to miss its intention&comma; which leans more towards fracture than flow&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>In the end&comma; <em>The Ways We Fought<&sol;em> is a bold book about how girls speak when they are not allowed to&comma; and how women remember when no one believes them&period; It is not a loud book&period; But it is a brave one&period; And sometimes&comma; in the hush between lines&comma; you hear the real sound of 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