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The Lost Laughter: An Analysis of Gabriel Okara’s “Once Upon a Time”

<body><div class&equals;"booster-block booster-read-block">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"twp-read-time">&NewLine; &Tab;<i class&equals;"booster-icon twp-clock"><&sol;i> <span>Read Time&colon;<&sol;span>4 Minute&comma; 39 Second <&sol;div>&NewLine;&NewLine; <&sol;div>&NewLine;<p>Gabriel Okara’s <em>Once Upon a Time<&sol;em> is a poignant and powerful lament for lost innocence&comma; authenticity&comma; and the erosion of genuine human connection under societal pressures and the adoption of Westernised values&period; Through a deceptively simple&comma; almost childlike narrative structure&comma; Okara masterfully employs thematic contrasts&comma; distinctive stylistic choices&comma; and a range of poetic devices to critique the hypocrisy and superficiality prevalent in modern society&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<h3 class&equals;"wp-block-heading">Themes<&sol;h3>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>The central theme of the poem is the loss of innocence and authenticity&period; The speaker&comma; an older man&comma; wistfully recalls a past where smiles were genuine&comma; laughter came from the heart&comma; and social interactions were sincere&period; This contrasts sharply with the present&comma; where smiles are &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;fixed portrait smiles” and laughter is a &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;cold-eyed”&comma; performative act&comma; learnt &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;to show teeth&period;” This shift represents a profound dehumanisation and the adoption of a mask of conformity&period; The speaker articulates the burden of learning to &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;wear many faces&comma;” highlighting a loss of self in the pursuit of acceptance and success in a materialistic world&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>Another prominent theme is the critique of artificiality and hypocrisy&period; Okara condemns the superficiality of modern interactions&comma; where people &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;shake hands without their hearts&comma;” and conversations are driven by self-interest and transactional motives &lpar;&OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;&OpenCurlyQuote;Feel at home&excl;’ &OpenCurlyQuote;Come again’… when I come again and feel at home&comma; once&comma; twice&comma; there will be no thrice”&rpar;&period; This exposes the insincere politeness that has replaced true hospitality and genuine warmth&period; The poem subtly suggests that this artificiality is a consequence of adopting a new&comma; perhaps colonial&comma; way of being that prioritises outward appearance over inner truth&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>The poem also touches on nostalgia and regret&period; The speaker’s repeated longing to &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;unlearn all these muting things” and return to his &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;old&comma; old simple ways” underscores a deep regret for the person he has become and a yearning for the simpler&comma; more authentic self he once was&period; This nostalgia is not merely sentimental but carries a heavy sense of loss for a societal past that valued sincerity&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<h3 class&equals;"wp-block-heading">Style<&sol;h3>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>Okara’s style in <em>Once Upon a Time<&sol;em> is characterised by its narrative&comma; conversational tone&comma; reminiscent of a fable or folk tale&comma; which directly relates to the &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;once upon a time” opening&period; This accessible style makes the poem’s profound message relatable&period; The use of first-person perspective &lpar;&OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;I”&rpar; allows for an intimate and confessional voice&comma; drawing the reader directly into the speaker’s personal lament&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>The poem’s structure is linear&comma; progressing from the speaker’s recollection of a purer past to his current state of disillusionment and his desire for change&period; Each stanza marks a distinct aspect of the learnt artificiality&period; The repetition of phrases such as &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;I have learnt to wear many faces” and the cyclical nature of his yearning for a return to simplicity emphasise the depth of his internal conflict and the pervasive nature of societal change&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>The simple&comma; almost childlike vocabulary contrasts sharply with the complex and mature themes being explored&comma; creating a powerful ironic effect&period; This simplicity makes the poem’s message universally understandable&comma; transcending cultural barriers&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<h3 class&equals;"wp-block-heading">Poetic Devices<&sol;h3>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>Okara skilfully employs several poetic devices to enhance the poem’s impact&colon;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<ul class&equals;"wp-block-list">&NewLine;<li><strong>Metaphor<&sol;strong>&colon; The most pervasive metaphor is the &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;faces” the speaker learns to wear&comma; representing the various masks of insincerity and conformity&period; His &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;heart” is also metaphorically presented as something that can be &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;fixed” or that once contained &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;authentic laughter&period;” The contrast between &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;cold-eyed” laughter and the warmth of genuine smiles is a subtle but effective metaphor for emotional detachment&period;<&sol;li>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<li><strong>Personification<&sol;strong>&colon; &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;The sun” is personified as it &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;fixed its portrait smile&comma;” subtly linking the natural world’s perceived sincerity with the artificiality of human expression&period; Similarly&comma; &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;doors” are personified as they &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;slam on my back&comma;” symbolising rejection and lack of genuine welcome&period;<&sol;li>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<li><strong>Repetition<&sol;strong>&colon; The phrase &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;I have learnt” is repeated throughout the poem&comma; emphasising the arduous and often painful process of internalising societal expectations and losing one’s innate authenticity&period; The opening &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;Once upon a time” sets the fable-like tone&comma; while its underlying lament reinforces the distance from that simpler past&period;<&sol;li>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<li><strong>Juxtaposition&sol;Contrast<&sol;strong>&colon; The poem thrives on sharp contrasts between past and present&colon; &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;authentic laughter” vs &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;cold-eyed smile&comma;” &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;warm hands” vs &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;ice-block hands&comma;” &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;feeling at home” vs &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;slamming doors&period;” This stark juxtaposition highlights the negative transformation the speaker has undergone and the societal decline he perceives&period;<&sol;li>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<li><strong>Imagery<&sol;strong>&colon; Vivid imagery&comma; though often simple&comma; paints clear pictures&colon; &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;fixed portrait smile&comma;” &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;cold-eyed&comma;” &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;ice-block hands&comma;” &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;shake hands without their hearts&period;” These images contribute to the poem’s sense of disillusionment and artificiality&period;<&sol;li>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<li><strong>Alliteration<&sol;strong>&colon; While not overly dominant&comma; subtle alliteration such as &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;fixed portrait smile” and &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;show teeth” adds a soft musicality and reinforces the imagery&period;<&sol;li>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<li><strong>Irony<&sol;strong>&colon; There is deep irony in the speaker’s &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;learning” process&period; What he learns are &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;muting things” that stifle his true self&comma; rather than liberating or empowering him&period; The &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;civilised” behaviour he adopts leads to a more superficial and less human existence&period;<&sol;li>&NewLine;<&sol;ul>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<div class&equals;'w3eden'><&excl;-- WPDM Link Template&colon; Default Template -->&NewLine;&NewLine;<div class&equals;"link-template-default card mb-2">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"card-body">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"media">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"mr-3 img-48"><img class&equals;"wpdm&lowbar;icon" alt&equals;"Icon" src&equals;"https&colon;&sol;&sol;www&period;wrr&period;ng&sol;wp-content&sol;plugins&sol;download-manager&sol;assets&sol;file-type-icons&sol;pdf&period;svg" &sol;><&sol;div>&NewLine; <div class&equals;"media-body">&NewLine; <h3 class&equals;"package-title"><a 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Upon a Time<&sol;em> is a profound meditation on the erosion of authenticity in the face of societal change&period; Through its accessible narrative style&comma; potent metaphors&comma; and effective use of contrast and repetition&comma; the poem powerfully articulates a universal yearning for a return to genuine human connection and a critique of the masks we learn to wear&period; It stands as a timeless commentary on the perils of losing one’s true self in the pursuit of superficial acceptance&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p>I’ve refined the text to align with British English conventions while maintaining the richness of the analysis&period; Let me know if you’d like any further adjustments&excl;<&sol;p>&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;&NewLine;<p class&equals;"has-text-align-right has-black-color has-pale-cyan-blue-background-color has-text-color has-background has-link-color has-medium-font-size wp-elements-2ce83f93716b8b01f6b072bd78949af4"><em>Written with Gemini 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