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EBIDENYEFA ACHIEVES BEAUTY AND MEANING IN ‘THESE WORDS ARE NOT MINE’: a review by Rosemary Utavie-Jerry

<body><div class&equals;"booster-block booster-read-block">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"twp-read-time">&NewLine; &Tab;<i class&equals;"booster-icon twp-clock"><&sol;i> <span>Read Time&colon;<&sol;span>5 Minute&comma; 46 Second <&sol;div>&NewLine;&NewLine; <&sol;div><p><&sol;p><strong>TITLE&colon;<&sol;strong> <a title&equals;"THESE WORDS ARE NOT MINE&colon; a pilgrim’s note &lpar;poems&rpar;" href&equals;"http&colon;&sol;&sol;wrr&period;ng&sol;authorpedia&sol;these-words-are-not-mine-a-pilgrims-note-poems&sol;">THESE WORDS ARE NOT MINE<&sol;a><br>&NewLine;<strong>AUTHOR&colon;<&sol;strong> <a title&equals;"EBIDENYEFA TARILA NIKADE" href&equals;"http&colon;&sol;&sol;wrr&period;ng&sol;authorpedia&sol;ebidenyefa-tarila-nikade&sol;">EBIDENYEFA TARILA NIKADE<&sol;a><br>&NewLine;<strong>GENRE&colon;<&sol;strong> POETRY<br>&NewLine;<strong>PUBLISHER&colon;<&sol;strong> Words Rhymes &amp&semi; Rhythm<br>&NewLine;<strong>YEAR OF PUBLICATION&colon;<&sol;strong> 2015<br>&NewLine;<strong>PAGES<&sol;strong>&colon; 95<br>&NewLine;<strong>ISBN&colon;<&sol;strong> 978-978-947-211-6<br>&NewLine;<strong>REVIEWER&colon;<&sol;strong> Rosemary Utavie-Jerry&NewLine;<p>&OpenCurlyQuote;THESE WORDS ARE NOT MINE’ is a collection of 58 poems which addresses various issues of life&period; The poet explores the power of language to craft beautiful lines which appeals to readers’ emotion&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote><p>Prominent among the themes is that of love&comma; womanhood&comma; death&comma; gratitude etc&period;<&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>The collection is structured into five parts&comma; namely&colon; A PILGRIM’S NOTE &lpar;which comprises of 8 poems&rpar;&comma; SONGS FROM AN ANGEL HEART &lpar;comprising 10 poems&rpar;&comma; FEMININITY &lpar;comprising 17 poems&rpar;&comma; THE FLOOD &lpar;3 poems&rpar;&comma; LIFE &lpar;20 poems&rpar;&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p><strong>A PILGRIM’S NOTE&colon;<&sol;strong><&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>This section is like a diary in which the poet recounts her experiences when she went on pilgrimage to Jerusalem&period; The poems in this section are mostly didactic&comma; although two centres on love&period; It opens with &OpenCurlyQuote;WALKING IN HIS FOOTSTEPS’ which is purely a Christian religious poem&period; It confirms the stories we read in the bible about the birth and crucifixion of Jesus Christ&period; The poet persona uses this poem to show proof that biblical stories are true as she beholds with <em>&OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;eyes wide open the holy place of his birth and crucifixion”<&sol;em>&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>With &OpenCurlyQuote;MILES AWAY’ she recounts how much she misses her man&semi; with &OpenCurlyQuote;PILGRIM’S BIRTHDAY’ she shares her gratitude for her birthday coinciding on her pilgrimage&period; She exclaims with joy&colon; <em>&OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;this birthday on pilgrimage is a perfect gift&comma; picture for a lifetime”<&sol;em>&period; She also recounts her unpleasant ordeal with the air hostess and other pilgrims in &OpenCurlyQuote;THE HOSTESS’&period; The air hostess can be said to be a racist because of her dislike and &OpenCurlyQuote;disdain’ for black people&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p><a href&equals;"http&colon;&sol;&sol;wrr&period;ng&sol;authorpedia&sol;wp-content&sol;uploads&sol;2015&sol;06&sol;THESE-WORDS-ARE-NOT-MINE-a-pilgrim&percnt;E2&percnt;80&percnt;99s-note-poems-by-EBIDENYEFA-TARILA-NIKADE-3&period;jpg"><img class&equals;"aligncenter wp-image-3043 size-large" src&equals;"http&colon;&sol;&sol;wrr&period;ng&sol;authorpedia&sol;wp-content&sol;uploads&sol;2015&sol;06&sol;THESE-WORDS-ARE-NOT-MINE-a-pilgrim&percnt;E2&percnt;80&percnt;99s-note-poems-by-EBIDENYEFA-TARILA-NIKADE-3-964x1024&period;jpg" alt&equals;"THESE WORDS ARE NOT MINE a pilgrim’s note &lpar;poems&rpar; by EBIDENYEFA TARILA NIKADE &lpar;3&rpar;" width&equals;"702" height&equals;"746" loading&equals;"lazy"><&sol;a><&sol;p>&NewLine;<p><strong>SONGS FROM AN ANGEL’S HEART&colon;<&sol;strong><&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>The second part of this collection is termed &OpenCurlyQuote;SONGS FROM AN ANGEL’S HEART’ and has a total of ten poems which centres on love&period; The following&colon; &OpenCurlyQuote;YOU’&comma; &OpenCurlyQuote;TORN BETWEEN CHOICES’&comma; &OpenCurlyQuote;BURNING DESIRES’ celebrates love in its true and sincere form&semi; &OpenCurlyQuote;A TEEN IN LOVE’&comma; &OpenCurlyQuote;YES&comma; IT CAN’&comma; &OpenCurlyQuote;TICK TICK’ bemoans deceit and disappointment associated with love&period; The poems here run in opposite direction&comma; while some portray love as a sweet and blissful feeling&comma; others depict love as a deceitful desire that brings tears and heart breaks&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>In &OpenCurlyQuote;A TEEN IN LOVE’&comma; the poet tells us about the lustful adventure of a teenager who is blindfolded by the words of a man and gives in to his advances but the man only &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;explored her hottest secrets” and broke her heart&period; The same deceit is expressed in &OpenCurlyQuote;YES&comma; IT CAN’&semi; love according to the poet can be deceitful and disappointing when it is not from a sincere heart&period; She admonishes young people to be careful&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p><strong>FEMININITY&colon;<&sol;strong><&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>In this section&comma; the poet celebrates the essence of womanhood&period; In twenty poems&comma; she extols the unique qualities of womanhood such as virginity&comma; menstrual cycle&comma; pregnancy&comma; child bearing&comma; home making etc&period; She dedicates two poems in memory of her children who has ceased to be and another to her &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;living testimony”&period; She also writes about troublesome women&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>The collection of poem in this section paints a picture of peace&comma; calm&comma; innocence&comma; chastity and other virtues a woman represents&period; But on the other hand&comma; few of the poems such as <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;THE WITCH’&comma; &OpenCurlyQuote;VIRTUOUS VILLAIN’<&sol;em>&comma; and <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;SHE LIED<&sol;em>’ depict the dark side of a woman&period; The poet is of the opinion that a woman is created to be a companion&comma; graceful&comma; prayerful&comma; patient and not one who antagonises peace&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p><strong>THE FLOOD&colon; <&sol;strong><&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>The flood comprises of three poems and recounts the devastating impact of the 2012 flood&period; Water which symbolises life became a destructive agent in 2012&period; Some devastating effect as captured in &OpenCurlyQuote;<em>MR&period; FLOOD<&sol;em>’ and <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;THE BITTERLEAF TREE’<&sol;em> are&colon; Homelessness – it rendered people homeless&semi; Death – it killed people&comma; animals and plants withered&period; It didn’t spare the rich and did not discriminate against the poor&period; It made exotic cars useless and a worthless piece of carved wood &lpar;Canoe&rpar; important and useful&period; The flood according to the poet came with nothing but destruction and death&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p><a href&equals;"http&colon;&sol;&sol;wrr&period;ng&sol;authorpedia&sol;wp-content&sol;uploads&sol;2015&sol;06&sol;THESE-WORDS-ARE-NOT-MINE-a-pilgrim&percnt;E2&percnt;80&percnt;99s-note-poems-by-EBIDENYEFA-TARILA-NIKADE-2&period;jpg"><img class&equals;"aligncenter wp-image-3033 size-large" src&equals;"http&colon;&sol;&sol;wrr&period;ng&sol;authorpedia&sol;wp-content&sol;uploads&sol;2015&sol;06&sol;THESE-WORDS-ARE-NOT-MINE-a-pilgrim&percnt;E2&percnt;80&percnt;99s-note-poems-by-EBIDENYEFA-TARILA-NIKADE-2-1024x576&period;jpg" alt&equals;"THESE WORDS ARE NOT MINE a pilgrim’s note &lpar;poems&rpar; by EBIDENYEFA TARILA NIKADE &lpar;2&rpar;" width&equals;"702" height&equals;"395" loading&equals;"lazy"><&sol;a><&sol;p>&NewLine;<p><strong>LIFE&colon; <&sol;strong><&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>The central message in this section is the frailty and fragility of human life&period; It underscores the delicate nature of human existence&period; Somewhere a baby is born and somewhere else a person leaves the world&period; There are also poems which talks about youthful indulgence&comma; time and the change that comes with it&comma; nationhood&comma; creativity etc&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>The star poem <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;THESE WORDS ARE NOT MINE’<&sol;em> which makes the title of the whole collection is in this section too&period; <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;THESE WORDS ARE NOT MINE’<&sol;em> and <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;WHAT CAN WORDS DO’<&sol;em> sum up the essence of creativity which is the basis for writing&period; The poet presents creativity as a driving force that compels her to write&period; According to her&comma; the words penned down come from within and it can do &OpenCurlyQuote;everything’&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p><strong>LANGUAGE AND STYLE&colon;<&sol;strong><&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Style according to the New Webster’s Dictionary is the &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;distinguishing way in which something is done&comma; said&comma; written&comma; made&comma; executed etc&period;” In literature&comma; style is therefore the &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;particular way someone uses words to express ideas&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote><p>Ebidenyefa is unique in this regard&semi; her careful selection of diction in pouring out her thoughts is distinctive&period; The language used in the poetry collection is very lucid and she uses a whole lot of literary devices in achieving beauty and meaning in this piece&period;<&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>Most significant of the devices used is the figurative language&semi; she employs quite a number of figures of speech&period; For example&comma; simile and metaphor run through the collection&period; She always makes comparison between things&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Hear her&colon;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>In <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;LINES OF INNOCENCE’<&sol;em>&comma; she says&colon;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote><p>&OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;The shower of his spill like the gurara falls…&period;<&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>In <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;BIG BOLD AND BEAUTIFUL’&comma;<&sol;em> she says&colon;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote><p>&OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;I stand like a gold fish…”<&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>Oxymoron is beautifully used in <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;LOVE I HAIL THEE’<&sol;em> and <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;THE VIRTUOUS VILLAIN’<&sol;em>&semi; in these poems she selects words which opposes themselves and combines them to create witty humour&period; Also&comma; there are sound devices such as alliteration&comma; onomatopoeia&comma; and repetition cutting across the collection&period; These give the poems rhythm&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>It is worthy to mention that typographical errors are almost inevitable but writers should try to avoid it&period; To this end&comma; the poet should look at misspelt words that are found in the work and effect correction in subsequent reprints&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote><p>The book is a true reflection of a writer’s imaginative prowess&comma; Ebidenyefa exhibits a fine mastery of language&semi; she carefully selects her words to suit her purpose&period; The general language of the poem is simple and can be understood by everyone&period;<&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>The cover design of the book is commendable&comma; the picture used is apt&comma; it epitomizes the idea expressed in the work&period; It is an artistic representation of the book title&period; In all&comma; &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;These words are not mine” is a creative manifestation of the writer’s skill and writing ability&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote>&NewLine;<p style&equals;"text-align&colon; center&semi;"><a title&equals;"THESE WORDS ARE NOT MINE&colon; a pilgrim’s note &lpar;poems&rpar;" 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