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AYOOLA’S ‘MEDITATIONS’ USES POETRY TO TALK ABOUT POETRY – a review by Joseph Omotayo

<body><div class&equals;"booster-block booster-read-block">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"twp-read-time">&NewLine; &Tab;<i class&equals;"booster-icon twp-clock"><&sol;i> <span>Read Time&colon;<&sol;span>4 Minute&comma; 35 Second <&sol;div>&NewLine;&NewLine; <&sol;div><p><&sol;p><strong>TITLE&colon;<&sol;strong> <a href&equals;"http&colon;&sol;&sol;wrr&period;ng&sol;authorpedia&sol;meditations&sol;">MEDITATIONS<&sol;a><br>&NewLine;<strong>AUTHOR&colon;<&sol;strong> GOODNESS OLANREWAJU AYOOLA<br>&NewLine;<strong>GENRE&colon;<&sol;strong> POETRY<br>&NewLine;<strong>NUMBER OF PAGES&colon;<&sol;strong> 122<br>&NewLine;<strong>PUBLISHER&colon;<&sol;strong> WORDS RHYMES &amp&semi; RHYTHM<br>&NewLine;<strong>YEAR OF PUBLICATION&colon;<&sol;strong> 2016<br>&NewLine;<strong>ISBN&colon;<&sol;strong> 978-978-954-244-4<br>&NewLine;<strong>REVIEWER&colon;<&sol;strong> JOSEPH OMOTAYO&NewLine;<blockquote><p>&OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;i am an open room selling silence…<br>&NewLine;…i am back here where words are not whores of linguistics” &lpar;pg&period; 16&rpar;<&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>This collection makes me remember many things&period; I remember metapoetry&period; I remember Octavio Paz&period; I remember beauty&period; I remember everything&period; Goodness Olanrewaju Ayoola has not only written an entertaining collection of poetry&comma; the way he courses through your thoughts is marvelling&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote><p>Meditations is a collection of poems that probes and throws up questions that probes more&period;<&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>There is an endless chain of thoughts in this collection of poems&period; With this collection of poems&comma; Goodness Olanrewaju Ayoola is calling us into that attentive space that fosters thoughts&period; The collection seems to touch all realities&period; This is one thing I’ve always appreciated about collections of poetry&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote><p>There are lines in this collection that need to be read twice over&period; In fact&comma; nothing in this collection is to be given a cursory look&period;<&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>Meditations is a book of deep thoughts on the affairs of a people&comma; of love and of a nation&period; This poetry book is rich embroidery of something dear&period; Issues intertwine to show everything that makes life and everything that troubles it&period; Goodness Olanrewaju Ayoola reflects on sundry issues&period; This writer’s mind must be gold&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Divided into five parts&comma; this collection is whole&period; No theme is missing&period; In a part&comma; the writer follows the tradition common with contemporary poets when he bellyaches about the quagmire this nation is in&period; This almost does it in for me&period; The trouble is not in the lines though&comma; rather&comma; the complex of Nigeria is an all too familiar subject that anything that speaks about it becomes drab&period; Talk about being so inured to the lapsing structure that is the country&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote><p>Meditations uses poetry to talk about poetry&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p><img class&equals;"aligncenter size-full wp-image-32231" src&equals;"http&colon;&sol;&sol;wrr&period;ng&sol;wp-content&sol;uploads&sol;2016&sol;07&sol;MEDITATIONS-by-Goodness-Olanrewaju-square&period;jpg" alt&equals;"" loading&equals;"lazy"><&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>This is how it draws on the resource of metapoetry&period; And Octavio Paz’s poetry comes to mind&period; There is the use of abstractness to achieve tangibility&period; These lines remind me so much of Octavio Paz’s The Spoken Word&colon;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote><p>&OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;and in the beginning there is an emptiness<br>&NewLine;a pen and craving spaces…<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>a poet and thoughts<br>&NewLine;lines and then poetry…<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>and the poetry is good…<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>here lies the creation of poetry<br>&NewLine;moulded in an empty emptiness…<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>like the emptiness in the lifting<br>&NewLine;within the veins of a trodden thread<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>heavily light&period;” &lpar;pg&period; 20&rpar;<&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>It is so beautiful&comma; a kind of sweet paradox&comma; when poetry talks about itself&period; This is a rare kind of poetry I adore&period; As inscrutable as the poetry of Octacvio Paz may seem in its abstractness and flailing attempts at striking meanings&comma; he writes a kind of poetry that astounds you nonetheless&period; This writer seems to have dug into that tradition of poetry to mesmerise and de-familiarise us from the common&period; Another thing I like about this collection is that meanings are couched for your hunting&period; This is not for an inattentive reader&colon;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote><p>&OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;and Adam knew his husband Steve<br>&NewLine;and he conceived…<br>&NewLine;we could not Abel or Cain the child<br>&NewLine;for he was delivered of a long fart cry…<br>&NewLine;and laugh tears…” &lpar;pg&period; 22&rpar;<&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>With the forceful move of that short peom&comma; you remember the shortest poem of Octavio Paz&comma; The Passage&period; Meditations make me remember Octavio Paz so much&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>This collection draws you into the beauty of word use&period; &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;an ear” is one of such many poems of wonder&period; It calls always going back to&period; Goodness Olanrewaju Ayoola’s lines are that selfish&semi; wanting all the reader’s attention&period; Read &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;an ear”&period; Meanings are incised&period; And you need to dig them up&period; It’s fun&period; Dig them up&colon;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote><p>&OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;last night…<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>i was an ear<br>&NewLine;punctured<br>&NewLine;by the holes of filthiness<br>&NewLine;severed<br>&NewLine;by the teeth of saw-ants…<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>i was an ear<br>&NewLine;torn<br>&NewLine;like a song nailed on the cross of cacophonies<br>&NewLine;crushed<br>&NewLine;like a virgin rose tramped under hurried feet<br>&NewLine;bruised by her own thorns…<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>without a face<br>&NewLine;without the songs of goodbye<br>&NewLine;to mother and her tales of tortures<br>&NewLine;to my twin sister on the other side” &lpar;18&rpar;<&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>Meditations packs brilliance into &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;radio&comma; curiosity and murder”&period; I could buy this collection because of this poem&period; Arguably&comma; &OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;radio&comma; curiosity and murder” is the climax of this collection placed in the middle of the book&period; Everything is deployed into this poem&period; Numerous figures of speech are condensed in such rare prosaic poetic beauty&period; The idea of radio is toyed on with such confident expressions&period; This poem is Goodness Olanrewaju Ayoola telling us his poesy is unquestionable&period; He lavishes ingenuity on this poem&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote><p>&OpenCurlyDoubleQuote;i inserted dry cells<br>&NewLine;into your anus<br>&NewLine;where your heart is-<br>&NewLine;and you opened your red eye…<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>i had questions<br>&NewLine;why your heart is in your anus&quest;<br>&NewLine;how you breathe from dry cells&quest;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>i pulled out your tin-thin horn<br>&NewLine;and twisted your tongue<br>&NewLine;then ambience came<br>&NewLine;a voice of a woman<br>&NewLine;too much laughter<br>&NewLine;too much talk<br>&NewLine;a meow…wavering shrills<br>&NewLine;a voice of a man<br>&NewLine;news and dread<br>&NewLine;obituary-government-people-society<br>&NewLine;a truth and so many lied and new lies…” &lpar;pg&period; 28&rpar;<&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>Read Meditations&comma; think&comma; read it again&comma; think&comma; and read again&period; I recommend this&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<figure id&equals;"attachment&lowbar;3873" aria-describedby&equals;"caption-attachment-3873" style&equals;"width&colon; 702px" class&equals;"wp-caption alignnone"><a href&equals;"http&colon;&sol;&sol;wrr&period;ng&sol;authorpedia&sol;wp-content&sol;uploads&sol;2016&sol;07&sol;Goodness-Olanrewaju-Ayoola-author-of-MEDITATIONS-poems-1-1&period;jpg"><img class&equals;"size-large wp-image-3873" src&equals;"http&colon;&sol;&sol;wrr&period;ng&sol;authorpedia&sol;wp-content&sol;uploads&sol;2016&sol;07&sol;Goodness-Olanrewaju-Ayoola-author-of-MEDITATIONS-poems-1-1-1024x578&period;jpg" alt&equals;"GOODNESS OLANREWAJU AYOOLA&comma; author of MEDITATIONS" width&equals;"702" height&equals;"396" loading&equals;"lazy"><&sol;a><figcaption id&equals;"caption-attachment-3873" class&equals;"wp-caption-text">GOODNESS OLANREWAJU AYOOLA&comma; 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