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SYMBOLISM & IMAGERY IN POETRY: An ANALYSIS of ‘COUNTABLE STARS’ by Ebuka Wiz Godwin

<body><div class&equals;"booster-block booster-read-block">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"twp-read-time">&NewLine; &Tab;<i class&equals;"booster-icon twp-clock"><&sol;i> <span>Read Time&colon;<&sol;span>6 Minute&comma; 39 Second <&sol;div>&NewLine;&NewLine; <&sol;div><p>Poetry&comma; broken down to its simplest meaning&comma; is the arrangement of words to share an idea&comma; experience&comma; or message with others&period; It is however different from news&comma; articles&comma; prose – which also use words to pass meanings across&comma; mainly by its form and language&period; Form as implied her refers to the verse structure that contrasts the stanza format of other writings&period; Language here does not refer to spoken language&comma; say Yoruba&comma; English or Spanish&comma; but the choice of words – diction&comma; the manipulation of words and condensation&comma; and or simplification of meanings&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>A poet’s use of language and choice of form determines his or her style&comma; often recognizable over a body of works&period; It is the word selection he or she favors that determines the identity the poems carry and&comma; to a large extent&comma; the messages they are able to hold within&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote><p>In the process of welding words together – basically the stringing of ideas&comma; experiences&comma; assumptions and accumulated knowledge&comma; like the beading of a necklace&comma; the poet creates images in the mind of the reader&period; Where the poet has shared experiences with the audience the meanings embedded in his poems come to life&period;<&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>These images are aided by the use of poetic devices&comma; which&comma; interestingly&comma; could appear in a poem without the poet’s knowledge&period; Sometimes&comma; the words have a way of falling in place in a poem to create meaning alien to the poet&period; But the conscious poet pens deliberately&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>In the poem <a href&equals;"http&colon;&sol;&sol;poetry&period;wrr&period;ng&sol;countable-stars-by-ebuka-wiz-godwin&sol;" target&equals;"&lowbar;blank" rel&equals;"noopener noreferrer">&OpenCurlyQuote;COUNTABLE STARS’&comma;<&sol;a> Ebuka Wiz Godwin shows how a poet can master a single word&comma; or group of words&comma; and mutilate&comma; then remold it &lpar;them&rpar;&comma; so masterfully that it takes on multiple meanings&period; Each meaning is uniquely independent of the others and yet unarguably connected to the others&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Ebuka planted a single word &OpenCurlyQuote;star’ and let his readers to harvest multiple meaning&period; The poem is a classic example of the use of SYMBOLISM and IMAGERY &lpar;as well as several other literary devices&period; We will only concern ourselves with these three in this article&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Definition of these key terms is necessary so that we can proceed on the same page&colon;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<ul>&NewLine;<li>Imagery means to use figurative language to represent objects&comma; actions&comma; and ideas in such a way that it appeals to our physical senses&period; They create visual representation – mental pictures&comma; of the ideas being communicated in our minds&period; It could be achieved with a single word of group of words&period; It should be noted that imagery is often built on other literary devices&comma; especially simile or metaphor&comma; because the poet&comma; in trying to appeal to the senses&comma; uses comparisons&period;<&sol;li>&NewLine;<&sol;ul>&NewLine;<p>For example&comma; a poet may write&comma; &OpenCurlyQuote;<em>her voice filtered in&sol;through the whistling of the swaying trees&sol;soothing his ears’<&sol;em> or something like&comma; <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;stars formed on her eyeballs&sol;turning it into a Christmas sky’<&sol;em>&period; These create images as you read them&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<ul>&NewLine;<li>Symbolism in literature is the use of symbols to signify ideas and qualities by giving them symbolic meanings that are different from their literal sense&period; Simply put&comma; symbolism is using an object &lpar;idea&rpar; representing another to give it an entirely different meaning&period; The new meaning it often of greater importance than the original &lpar;&OpenCurlyQuote;ordinary’&rpar; meaning&period;<&sol;li>&NewLine;<&sol;ul>&NewLine;<p>For example&comma; a ring is just a band worn around the finger&comma; but a poem could say &OpenCurlyQuote;their rusted ring is cold and lonely’ implying that their marriage represented by the word <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;ring’<&sol;em> has gone sour over the years&period; Consider also&colon; <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;the green white green&sol;now stained black-red and tattered&sol;no longer flutters with pride’<&sol;em>&period; Here <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;green-and-white’<&sol;em> is the Nigerian flag and by extension&comma; Nigeria&period; It is imagery&comma; but also littered with symbols&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Consider the poem<a href&equals;"http&colon;&sol;&sol;poetry&period;wrr&period;ng&sol;countable-stars-by-ebuka-wiz-godwin&sol;" target&equals;"&lowbar;blank" rel&equals;"noopener noreferrer"><em> &OpenCurlyQuote;COUNTABLE STARS’<&sol;em><&sol;a><&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote><p>I tried counting the stars&comma; several nights I stayed up<br>&NewLine;One&comma; two&comma; three&comma; four<br>&NewLine;I lost count&comma; didn’t know which I had counted or not<br>&NewLine;May be they disappear&comma; may be they split&comma; may be they run<br>&NewLine;It’s as futile as having fire flies light a cord<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>But there are countable stars&semi;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Like the one strapped on the green bottle Papa returns home with&comma; in a stagger<br>&NewLine;He repeatedly sips from it and belches a stench of the lager brand – star<br>&NewLine;Like the star he promises Mama shortly before he slaps her<br>&NewLine;Her vision goes black-out like a night without a star<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>There was a star on the black uniform of Mama’s brother<br>&NewLine;His men whisked Papa away in police van&comma; they didn’t wear any star<br>&NewLine;I bet Papa saw many stars in their hands<br>&NewLine;Still Papa didn’t learn to tame his assaulting hands<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>Like the star that led the wise men to baby Jesus<br>&NewLine;Our Sunday school mistress illustrated it with an open scissors<br>&NewLine;She is the woman that stole Mama’s star<br>&NewLine;She snatched it from the hollow of Papa’s heart<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>There are countable stars in Mama’s eyes<br>&NewLine;Tiny sparkles on the tears that wets her eyes<br>&NewLine;There was a star that moon-less night Mama escaped with us<br>&NewLine;Through-out the sky it was the only source<br>&NewLine;It led us out of Papa’s wrath<&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>This poem is one big canvas with very clearly painted images that any reader can readily see&comma; identify with&comma; and appreciate&period; Every stanza created images as seen by the eyes of a young child living with an abusive father and a long-suffering mother&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>In stanza 1 we see a child counting stars in the sky&comma; maybe through the window&comma; maybe through the leaking roof&comma; or outside&semi; <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;I tried counting the stars&comma; several nights I stayed up’<&sol;em> the poet says before sharing the futile experience of counting stars – something most of us have failed at&period; Stanza 2 opens us to the abuse the poet witnesses&comma; his father’s irresponsibility&comma; his mother’s suffering and the picture we see is a family in chaos&comma; ruled by a drunken brute who  <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;returns home with&comma; in a stagger’<&sol;em> to threaten and abuse his mother – and <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;her vision goes black-out like a night without a star’&period;<&sol;em> Stanza 3 described and attempts by policemen&comma; led by his uncle&comma; to tame his father who &OpenCurlyQuote;saw many stars in’ policemen’s hands&comma; but obviously not enough stars<em> &OpenCurlyQuote;to tame his assaulting hands’<&sol;em>&period; We see clearly in stanza 4 that a hypocritical Sunday school teacher &OpenCurlyQuote;stole Mama’s star’ from the &OpenCurlyQuote;hollow of Papa’s heart’&comma; adding adultery to the list of sins been perpetuated by the drunken brute&period; It all comes to a head in Stanza 5 where the poet tells us that there are &OpenCurlyQuote;countable stars in Mama’s eyes’ on the &OpenCurlyQuote;moon-less night’ she escaped the abusive marriage&period; We can see her sneaking with her children that dark night&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<blockquote><p>Ebuka masterfully recreated a common story in verses&comma; such than we are able to see a lonely&comma; abandoned child turning to the sky for friendship&comma; an adulterous drunkard perpetually abusing his wife&comma; a hypocritical church woman and a strong woman who suffered before taking the decision to find safety&period; It is clear enough – if not too clear&period;<&sol;p><&sol;blockquote>&NewLine;<p>More impressive however is the poet’s symbolic use of the word &OpenCurlyQuote;star’ throughout the stars in the poem&period; In stanza 1 the stars represent the one seen in the sky at night&period; But in stanza 2&comma; the star is first the one on the popular beer brand bottle <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;Star’<&sol;em> and also the imaginary star seen when a person is hit on the head&period; In Stanza 3&comma; the star symbolized policemen and in 4 we see the star alluding to the Star of David&period; By the time we get to stanza 4&comma; <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;star’<&sol;em> meant the <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;love&sol;admiration&sol;respect&sol;worth’<&sol;em> of the mother which was stolen&sol;substituted by the mistress&period; In stanza 5 there is a mix of meanings for the word – it as stars as seen by teary eyes&comma; star in the sky and allusion to the Star of David which led the wise men to Jesus&comma; only that it led them <em>&OpenCurlyQuote;out of Papa’s wrath’<&sol;em>&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine;<p>This is a deliberately worded poem&period; It is excellent&period;<&sol;p>&NewLine; &NewLine; <div class&equals;"booster-block booster-author-block">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"be-author-details layout-square align-left">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"be-author-wrapper">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"booster-row">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"booster-column booster-column-two booster-column-mobile">&NewLine; <div class&equals;"be-author-image">&NewLine; <img alt&equals;"" src&equals;"https&colon;&sol;&sol;secure&period;gravatar&period;com&sol;avatar&sol;b75f88cadfa530f44c52ed1f8256fe25878ecc134172c196f36c53adfc34533d&quest;s&equals;400&amp&semi;d&equals;mm&amp&semi;r&equals;g" class&equals;"avatar avatar-400 photo avatar-img" 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